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domingo, 9 de noviembre de 2014

An unknown start (II)

She said to herself all was going to be well, she had been in a difficult situation before, she was able to keep walking. But her mind was divided into many opinions, the voices inside her head damaged her ears, she couldn't stop them, the confusion became into desperation, such an unfair battle with her thoughts, she suddenly stopped.

The cold wind seemed like it had silenced their singing , all was so quiet, so alone. The words faded out of her mind and then the fear hit her.A shadow appeared behind her, she didnt know how to react, she prefered stay in silence.

``Do you need help?´´

The voice sounded patiently. She wanted to move her mouth but her lips were stamped.

``What´s your name?´´

The man wanted to touch her shoulder but the small girl looked like a statue.

Senses

If don't know myself,
Who will know me better ?
It is such a strange question
 I don't even believe in it
No, I have to forget it
The answer it is not true at all

You look at me like a mirror in the roof
Waiting for the moonlight
Where the cats are meowing
Bursting their echoes in the hidden caves 
In the ocean
Does it come to you? Could you hear it?

Close the two doors of the soul and listen slowly to me,
Let the blue melody come into the loneliness
I know you are near, nearer from my voice

Follow the signals
Fill  the path with the tears
Build your base
Don’t wait only for me
I am used to sleeping in the dark
I will be there soon
I hope I will be there

I see blurred lines in your poetry
But it doesn't mean something to me


                 

Activity: Thesis

This week we have been working in create a Thesis , the sentence that opens a complete essay. This is my example:

Everybody should have the right of changing their name if they dont like it, because it is necessary to feel freedom and self confident with themselves.

Problems and solutions: Bad use of internet in teenagers

Millions of teenagers are connected to the net everyday without stopping, the problem comes when they start  making wrong decissions and exposure themselves to strangers.

Usually, parents don´t know well what their sons or daughters can be doing while they are in front of the computer but, sometimes their children are being mislead, trusting in fake accounts and making `friends´ with someone completely unknown and with bad intentions.

It´s something difficult to parents to discover that their children are really using the internet in the wrong way, but one solution to avoid it, could  be the control and supervision of the social networkings where their children pass most of time, try to find out something strange or even dangerous.

However, this parental supervisions could be the point to star many argues and can create in teenagers a wrong image of the parents figure, seeing them like the enemies, since teenagers would feel betrayed by their own parents and even more insecure if they dont find the support in their relatives.

For that reason, one of the best ways to persuade the bad use of the internet is to building a base of knowledge about the advantages and disadvantages of the net since they are kids, explaining the good purposes and the risk in using internet and above all, dont stop the communication between parents and children,although sometimes they can feel a bit overprotected.







lunes, 3 de noviembre de 2014

Shame

It's a shame that some people that are supposed to be polite, suddenly become so rude and unpleasant. Now, after this short but determined message I would like to write down something:

"Doesnt matter what kind of music , music and musician creates art, and it has to be respected, think before talk bad about any type of music"

Thanks for reading ;)

domingo, 2 de noviembre de 2014

An unknown start

Breathing, she was only breathing. She let the cold air come into her lungs and throw it to the emptiness again. She didn't know how many times she had been doing that, maybe for hours or maybe for seconds but each time the oxygen ripped her throat, she gave thanks for having that moment of life, although she felt the most hopeless person in the world, she knew that her life was just about to begin , in a forgotten scenery among the mountains, next to a broken car in the middle of a lonely road. She was holding a broken heart, trying to fix its small pieces once again with the salt water that was falling down from her eyes.

She rubbed her hands insistently and attempted to stop the shivers of her teeth, praying for someone who drives her to the camp. It couldn’t be so complicated to find a good soul ready to do good acts on Christmas night or that was what she thought.

The night fell stronger above her at the time she was sinking her feet in the snow.





sábado, 1 de noviembre de 2014

Differences between living in the city and living in a village.

First of all, I must say I´ve been living in a very small village all my life. In a village like mine, you will never get lose, almost all people knows you or your family, besides your neighbors will become part of your daily life, in fact, you will see them more often than your family. My village is a good place for example, to do sport, I can see the mountain from my window, it´s so near to the nature, activities like senderism, hiking or picnic can easily being carried out and you don´t need to go by car, this is other excuse for taking your bike and go ahead.


After some really good advantages, I confess that all that is gold does not glitter, and that means that many times you can feel tired of doing almost all weekends the same things. For that reason, I personally think that living in the city is far better.


The city is always alive, there are plenty of theatres, cafes, shops, people... Furthermore in many cases you don´t need to catch the bus or drive the car, It will be always fun to go through the streets, with someone or alone, feel the vibe of the city, the motion of the people around you, It seems like you are free of going wherever you want without obstacles, It´s like you belong to the city and of course, the city belongs to you.




To sum up, villages are good places if you are a nature lover or simply a quiet person who likes the lonely, but if you are a lively and curious mind, your perfect future will be  in a big city, full of things you most like.